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GMAT Prep: My Answer to Student’s Question on “Superficial Vs. Actual Parallelism”
So someone sent me this question to answer. He/she was getting confused with some of the concepts that he/she was reading from the Manhattan book for SC.
First, let me say that there is no such thing as “superficial” or “actual” parallelism! It’s amazing what fancy terms people throw around when the underlying concept is actually really simple!
Here’s what this person said:
GMAT Student: I have been refering to the Manhattan book for SC. It gives an eg. of superficial parallelism where there is a main clause and subordinate clause. It is illustrated in the eg. below:‘Ken travelled around the world, visiting historic sites, eating native foods, and learning about new culture.’
At first it might not sound right but according to Manhattan ppl the main clause is that ‘Ken travelled around the world’ and that ‘visiting historic sites, eating native foods, and learning about new culture’ is part of the subordinate clause, and it only provides additional information about the travel….According to this, ”Ken travelled around the world, visited historic sites, ate native foods, and learnt about new cultures’… would be incorrect because equal importance is given to all the clauses…
I totally understood this concept but now when i do sentences sometimes I cannot differentiate between sentences that require different parallelism in the main clause and subordinate clause and one’s that do not…
So please give me clarity on this concept, and also help me with the following sentence:
The galloping boulder bumped against the hillside, kicking up cloud of dust, and slightly changed direction.
A. kicking up cloud of dust
B. a cloud of dust is kicked up
C. a cloud of dust is kicking up
D. kicks up a cloud of dust
E. kicked up a cloud of dustNormally I would select E as the answer, but after knowing the rule of superficial vs actual parallelism I chose A, because according to me kicking up a cloud of dust is just a result of the boulder bumping against the hillside….
So now I’m waiting for help to know the right ans..and the logic behind it too…
Now, here’s my response. Hopefully you can answer this quickly as well.
GMATPill: I actually arrived at the answer E within 10 seconds without even considering the other answer choices.
How? Let me explain–it’s actually pretty simple.
You are confusing parallelism with “-ING” verbs in the context of “phrase, main sentence” structures.Quote:
The galloping boulder bumped against the hillside, kicking up cloud of dust, and slightly changed direction.A. kicking up cloud of dust
B. a cloud of dust is kicked up
C. a cloud of dust is kicking up
D. kicks up a cloud of dust
E. kicked up a cloud of dustStep 1) Examine the sentence structure: I noticed there were a bunch of commas and then the key word “and”–indicating this is a list of stuff……a, b, and c.
Step 2) Know that with lists (a, b, and c) all three items MUST be consistent. If one is in past tense, then they all must be in past tense. If one is an -ING verb, then they all must be -ING verbs.
Step 3) Notice the non-underlined portion has PAST-tense verbs: “bumped” and “slightly changed”
Step 4) Know that the form of “kick” must be “kicked”—which only answer E has. So I’m pretty confident E is the answer. I mark it and move on.
All that happened within 10 seconds.
Now let’s look at the first sentence you brought up:
‘Ken travelled around the world, visiting historic sites, eating native foods, and learning about new culture.’Step 1) Notice the verb is “travelled”
Step 2) Notice there’s a bunch of other verbs “visiting” “eating” “learning”—but wait a minute! These are -ING verbs!What do we know about -ING verbs especially when they are located next to commas? They modify the SUBJECT of the main sentence—which is Ken.
Step 3) Flip the sentence so it’s easier to read:
“Visiting historic sites, Ken travelled around the world.”
“Eating native foods, Ken travelled around the world.”
“Learning about new culture, Ken travelled around the world.”Step 4) Recognize that the -ING verbs are just descriptive phrases that describe Ken as he “travelled around the world.”
This sentence structure is TOTALLY different from the other example where you have a list of A, B, and C!
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GMAT Prep Data Sufficiency – Quick Response to Student Question
For each landscaping job that takes more than 4 hours, a certain contractor charges a total of r dollars for the first 4 hours plus 0.2r dollars for each additional hour or fraction of an hour, where r > 100. Did a particular landscaping job take more than 10 hours?(1) The contractor charged a total of $288 for the job.
(2) The contractor charged a total of 2.4r dollars for the job.
A. Statement (1) ALONE is sufficient, but statement (2) alone is not sufficient.
B. Statement (2) ALONE is sufficient, but statement (1) alone is not sufficient.
C. BOTH statements TOGETHER are sufficient, but NEITHER statement ALONE is sufficient.
D. EACH statement ALONE is sufficient.
E. Statements (1) and (2) TOGETHER are NOT sufficient.
So they tell us that minimum r is 100. So basically you have $100 for the first 4 hours and then (.2*100 = $20) for each additional hour.
(1) Tells us the total charge was $288.Hmmm.. How do we get from $100 to $288? Well, the first $100 is 4 hours. So how many additional hours at $20/addl hour would it take to get to $288?
Well, you need 5 additional hours to get to $200. To get to $288, you would need a little more than 9 additional hours—on top of the original 4 hours.
Combined, you get at least 13 hours.Now ask yourself—did the job take more than 10 hours? YES!
Now you should notice there is a variable r in the question. Can you think of another value for r such that the answer to the question is NO, instead of YES?
Well, you are told the minimum r is 100–however, there is no maximum for r! So what if r were $288. So it costs $288 for the first 4 hours?
Well, it looks like (1) is satisfied and the number of hours is only 4 hours!
Going back to the question—did the job take more than 10 hours? NO!So clearly we have conflicting answers here–YES and NO. Therefore, you know (1) is no good–so the answer must be (B), (C), or (E).
Now let’s look at (2):
A total of 2.4r dollars. Well, we know minimum r =100—so 2.4r would be $240.
How many hours to get to $240? Well, $100 for the first 4 hours means there’s $140 left to go from $100 to $240. $140 divided by $20/additional hour means 7 extra hours.Add that 7 hours to the original 4 hours and you get 11 hours. Is that more than 10 hours? Yes!
What if r were a higher number? What if r=1,000? So the total job costs $2,400. With $1,000 for first 4 hours + $200 per additional hour—that would be a total of 4 + 7 additional hours = 11 total hours.
Is that more than 10 hours? YES! So you see it doesn’t matter what r is—the answer here is always YES.So it looks like only (2) by itself gives you enough information to definitively answer the original question. Therefore, the answer is (B).
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How to “Do” GMAT Questions – Lessons From A Master Cellist

OK, so you’ve registered for the GMAT and got a hold of the Official Guide to the GMAT.You’re gonna “do” a bunch of practice questions and then you’ll be prepared for the GMAT. Right?
Wrong!
Sure, it’s a good idea to “do” GMAT questions, but I would say 95% of people don’t have the right MINDSET when it comes to “doing” questions.
Obviously, I should have some reason for making a claim like that. I mean, who the heck am I to say that most people don’t “do” questions the right way? That implies that I “do” questions the right way.
Well, let me answer that for you.
First, let me say that I am NOT naturally “smart.” Unlike some people who naturally “get it”–I usually have to work at it.
Second, even though I’m not naturally smart, I’ve developed a mental strategy that helps me get to where I need to be.

You see, I used to be a nationally ranked cellist and pianist (I admit I was overshadowed by my arch-nemesis, Yo-Yo Ma–pictured here at the Nobel Peace Prize ceremony–so I never quite made it on the international scene..haha ).Going through the painstaking process of learning and memorizing hours of musical literature and performing them under pressure taught me a few things that are surprisingly relevant to GMAT studying.
You: “What??!! Learning cello is related to GMAT studying??”“Me: Uh-huh…”
Think about it. “Doing” GMAT questions is like “practicing” new music. At first it’s completely new to you. But you have to process the new material in your head until you totally understand it. You can explain it. You can recite it. You understand it.
So how do you get from A to B?
So how do you get from “this is completely new to me” to “I know this” ????
“DO” GMAT Questions Like a Musician Well, in learning new music you don’t memorize the whole thing at first glance! You first take a small chunk, like the one below:

But of course you need to subdivide this chunk. So focus on the first measure first:

Focus on the left side.Figure it out note by note.
Identify where the beats are.
Identify the sentence structure and any commas you might see at first glance.
And find the correct way to play this and arrive at the correct answer.
When you’re ready, play this first measure all the way through without stopping and mark your correct answer. Then move on.

Focus on the right side.Now that you’ve got the first question or measure down, now you focus on the second measure. Do the same thing.
Find the pitfalls, avoid them, arrive at the correct answer.
Sure you might get “stuck” here and there, but when you’re ready–start from the beginning of the question and go all the way through and mark your correct answer.
OK, now that you’ve got questions #1 and #2 correct separately, let’s see if you can go through both of them all the way through without stopping or hesitating.
You want to make sure you can think through both questions confidently without any hiccups.
Sometimes, being exposed to #2, will alter how you might do #1. So you want to test yourself to see if you can go through both #1 and #2 without hesitation–AS IF it were a performance–AS IF it were the real GMAT.You see, this is how I would learn to master a musical piece. Break it into chunks. Subdivide the chunks and focus over and over. Then move to the next one and focus over and over. Then combine the two sub-chunks, practice and practice—until I master that subchunk.The same is true for “doing” GMAT questions.
First you go through a question. Check the answer. What the heck did you do wrong? How could you have answered that question correctly. Did you do a stupid mistake? Did you not see a comma or an obvious sentence structure that you should have seen? Read the explanation.
OK, move on to the next question. Do the same thing. Look at the explanation. Maybe you got it right, maybe there was a quicker, more efficient way of arriving at the correct answer. Why did you miss that more efficient way? How could you have thought about it better so you would arrive at the correct answer faster?
Keep doing this until by the end of the day you do maybe like 30 questions. Now by the time you do 30 questions, you probably forgot what the questions or answers were for question #1.
So start all over. See if you can plow through questions #1 – #30 without stopping and getting ALL of them right. After all, you SAW the answer explanations. So if you really “understood” the answer explanations, then you should have no problem going through the questions.
This is the approach you should be using when you “do” GMAT questions. Once you redo all 30 questions straight through. Now do another 30 questions. Then combine all 60 questions and see if you can run through all of them straight through without mistakes.
If you subdivide, think through groups of questions, and then REDO all those questions in different orders AS IF you were sitting for the real exam and you are aware of time pressure, I guarantee your studying will be that much more effective than what you are currently doing now.
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2 Quick Data Sufficiency in <4 minutes
Hey there!
Today I got two questions from customers that I wanted to let you in on. One represents a tricky way the GMAT folks trick you up on data sufficiency and the other one is good practice of a core framework of the GMAT Pill. Take a look.To A Higher GMAT Score,
Zeke
Question #1:
The operation * represents either addition, subtraction, or multiplication of integers, what is the value of 1 * 0?(1) 0 * 2 = 2
(2) 2 * 0 = 2Let’s follow through some of the analysis so far:
Statement 1
0+2 = 2? Yes
0-2 = 2? No
0/2 = 2? No
0*2 = 2? No(1) is sufficient.
Statement 2
2+0 = 2?Yes
2-0 = 2?YesWith (1) you DEFINITELY know * must be +. So Statement (1) is good.
With (2), it could be EITHER “+” or “-”. There is indeed ambiguity regarding which operation you should use.
But look carefully at the question. It asks:
what is the value of 1*0?Well, let’s break it down with the two operations: addition and subtraction.
what is the value of 1+0?
What is the value of 1-0?Notice the answer to each of the two situations is 1! There is NO ambiguity to the question.The answer is always 1 regardless of addition or subtraction.
Remember you need to answer the question and not get confused with the intermediary steps. When there is no ambiguity to the question then you know you do indeed have enough information. Therefore, (2) alone is good as well as (1) alone. So the overall answer is (D).
If I missed a point, please point out, but this seems like a typical way GMAT tries to trick you.
Question #2:
From May 1 to May 30 in the same year, the balance in a checking account increased. What was the balance in the checking account on May 30?(1) If, during this period of time, the increase in the balance in the checking account had been 12 percent, then the balance in the account on May 30 would have been $504
(2) During this period of time, the increase in the balance in the checking account was 8 percent.Let’s take a look.
There are three areas:
1) Beginning
2) Percentage change
3) EndThe question asks what was the end balance—basically it’s like for item #3. This is a typical framework of the GMAT Pill. You basically need two of the 3 in order to find the 3rd piece.So in order to find the end balance, you need both the beginning balance and the percentage change in between.
With statement (1) you see a HYPOTHETICAL percentage change and you also see a HYPOTHETICAL end number. From this you have enough info to find the ACTUAL BEGINNING balance–that’s the first piece of info we need but not enough to find the end balance.
With statement (2) we are given the ACTUAL PERCENTAGE change–that’s exactly the second piece of info we need in order to find the ACTUAL END balance. By itself, (2) is not enough info, but as we already knew we needed 2 pieces of info to solve this question and statement (2) gave us that. Therefore, only when combining both statements do we have enough info.
So when statements (1) and (2) combined are enough info, then the overall answer is (C).





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