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Helping A GMAT Student
A student asked me this ManhattanGMAT question and I helped her answer it. Here’s the initial explanation I sent her.Aerugo, also known as verdigris, is the green “bloom” visible on many copper items, and is produced, like iron rust, over the course of time by the exposure of the metal to the oxygen in the atmosphere.
(A) visible on many copper items, and is produced
(B) that is visible on many copper items, and which produces
(C) visible on many copper items, and produces
(D) that is visible on many copper items, and that produces
(E) which is visible on many copper items, and which is produced
The answer here is A. Let me explain.
The structure of the sentence is: Aerugo is [X], and is [Y].
where x = “the green bloom visible on many copper items”
y = “produced over the course of time”Don’t confuse this with the sentence structure that most people would see initially:
Aerugo is the green “bloom” [X], and [Y]
where x = visible on many copper items
y = is produedAt first glance, there may seem like something is wrong with A just because of the way they underline the sentence.
But if you step back and look at what the real structure of the sentence is, you’ll notice the keyword AND. Look to the left and look to the right.On the left you should see “is the green bloom visible on many copper items” and on the right you should see “is produced over the course of time.”
This is consistent.
All choices (B), (C), and (D) are incorrect because the end of the answer choices use the active verb “Produces” or “that produces” or “which produces”—you need to ask yourself: “Produce what?”
Well, if you sub it into the sentence, you’ll see: “that produces, like iron rust, over the course of time”
That doesn’t make sense! You don’t just “produce over the course of time.” You need to produce something. You need to produce [x].
Since it doesn’t make sense, all of them (B, C, and D) don’t make sense.Now, (A) does work because it does not follow this structure. Rather, it says the Aerugo “is produced, like iron rust, over the course of time.” This makes sense. Combine that with our analysis above with the X & Y consistency and you’ll see that answer (A) is correct.
Hope this helps!
Zeke
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Quote:Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away.A. wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling
B. wings, which is the same one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, that also enables
C. wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling
D. wings-the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence-also enables
E. wings-of the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence-also enableI surprisingly got to the answer D within 30 seconds. Let me show you how.
Step 1) Identify multiple commas—this is not a “laundry list” but rather several descriptive phrases. “Ultrathin” and “layered” are just words that describe “CONSTRUCTION.”
Step 2) The phrase “the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer” actually describes the “CONSTRUCTION of a butterfly’s wings“—NOT “wings” by itself.
Step 3) Cut the fluff:
“Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away. ”Construction are enabling? Doesn’t make sense! So you know (A) is wrong.
It should be:
“Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enables the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away. ”
Step 4) Browse through the answer choices–but don’t read them from the beginning—look at the last few words: that also enables, enabling, also enables, also enable…
Which ones make sense? The “construction” of these guys (where “construction” is singular) ENABLES.
You must use “ENABLES”—so either (B) or (D).Step 5) Note (B) has the extra word “that”—unnecessary. Also, it uses the word “which”—this implies the phrase describes “wings” when structurally the phrase really describes the “construction of the wings”–not the “wings.”
Therefore, (D) is the answer.
If you know how to strategically approach questions like these, you can most efficiently answer them in as little time as possible.
Study less. Score higher. Notice my explanation does not use any fancy grammar vocabulary.
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Zeke Lee
Co-Founder, The GMATPill Study Method
http://www.gmatpill.com
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